【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
1 U2 \0 j  x5 u) U8 |# z& H. r袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, c$ I. r$ J* k& I( Z4 o; x) v( rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

' Y- ~# o3 Y& Y我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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; t$ T4 \' ]1 ]- T5 E$ nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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( `- _, e7 s2 v' D在遇見你的第一刻
4 B0 h, T7 h% c( |' v$ `你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
3 @- w8 \' U: ]( c; d* a還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, x* f3 y7 _& O凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
+ w$ M0 k# Y/ J  B3 A/ ?- Z我也許就能了解
( Y0 {, X  u- K6 \0 f$ d# u/ B你的心情

Love… just the word love
% c! b4 u# Q% m" [& k& A/ pWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
8 u$ Y1 c* N# G  P' L+ M1 J為什麼
, H+ d* ^, ?2 f$ _0 i如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
) N/ I; i4 F  z3 y5 V+ u8 bBut I never did
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# ]6 k; I, b  k* ]* V愛你 想要告訴你
* t" n: ?& Y0 O7 Z9 ^8 T卻總是說不出來
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5 P. l  _" w1 J5 C2 r3 R) COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
# w; T; \! _0 r2 X7 F你將從我指間滑漏
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8 y$ }4 |7 x2 L3 l5 FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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# l( p5 u3 T0 s& G( B) u+ }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
6 D. B% M: P- n2 X. R9 A# g托付我的愛
9 p* i+ |# v3 O- V收在你心裡
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. B% Y( x5 \) @* DLove… just the word love
" e- v* U/ E! i2 {0 [Why is it so difficult to express?
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# T  d7 p8 u, I/ d+ _* \- K: M愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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" b" N; A' ^; \; |  w( X5 n) |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

) ^. M+ o! i. Q: {0 E: \/ z也許有一天
! @! @4 ?) T3 }5 }9 c" g+ G你將從我指間滑漏
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3 C# h/ F2 Q5 L' E2 a: t9 s7 zIf today isn’t too late,
3 U' U; s, l2 `# II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
+ N7 {8 a# o2 u讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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# E5 {% |+ @* _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
" _( {; Z+ y: B3 C" @9 r4 DEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) e1 _! N) t/ Z' l' ^可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡





6 |7 c6 w% Z' e对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
; M. T1 h) ^- j8 s4 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
' h. V8 a* f/ x8 f5 L我心充滿快樂
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. a3 B4 D% I  P. X% `. dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. ]$ d9 O! q3 g1 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
# ~# j8 D6 |- w3 A$ q月光輕吻著夜幕
2 ?1 B! P6 X* Z. i- l: I星空充滿著歡樂

" U  v" s; c% N+ T! X  q5 v, e7 ?It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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+ X  F# Q: {- i/ U我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
7 M5 z% V: G) H" G0 a終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
! B- e6 c' |6 C! I我心充滿著歡欣
0 Z$ m4 v9 ~+ V% l5 i9 J5 C2 L愛你
堅定不渝

9 \' m' }7 }) K" A  }& q" _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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3 _6 Z: v* i. L+ H- X2 h: X7 o你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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6 p' N% C/ S$ ^- Y* A' SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

2 E& |' G" n7 ~5 d能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

. X! x- o6 l- X1 `I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

" M6 C- g+ e8 `0 J8 tI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

) X+ N2 @. X9 u. V& s7 v) e+ N2 x我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
9 Q4 |0 [; t3 [0 V- F6 @來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
5 a7 r( i% D1 F5 }/ WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
3 v3 R" B0 S' Y5 L你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

' \! x; ]6 u% `8 t' eI regret not dying
0 j, J8 s( b6 ?: h2 H4 T4 ~. }I only have one tongue
) }) H5 n1 U) D' Z! oIt’s nothing close to 100,000
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/ E# ~1 ~+ x& T8 p) @0 ^1 b' Z可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
* `' {" e- q! E. l4 e3 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 j3 [$ E$ D+ b/ E6 H1 k如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
2 t  K9 X8 v! \0 o8 L( d- b千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

+ a  A( @/ y/ R; L, U- c/ h# T, v訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
  ~  b& E5 M1 S- B4 h# ^% nxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒