【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 L7 l) Q5 p) P. MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) K! r2 @+ v4 f0 i0 b. O/ d8 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 f, `" ?+ M& H; ~! H5 x  RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 _& j6 k5 m  _9 l. @. D2 KNothing can compare to my love
8 {: z# l* e& Z! S  b) R4 h; ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, S; k& ~) r: K1 V" @I want so much to see inside your heart
. [2 c, T4 E; w) Z6 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ T! Q3 m) B. L1 W7 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 _: v* _5 N) C4 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 J* b$ Q8 O7 X7 L6 w  J* {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 }( v) l' m9 T! R" wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ `5 X7 Q& ]* [$ T9 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 t8 ?2 b2 v9 F8 D( D* M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: m' h- K$ i+ J" Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 u; ^7 ?1 V4 D5 }/ i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 c( @" W/ u% s- `% o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 I3 c; z2 S4 [: ?1 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' ^/ r3 B" }& I7 ^! C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 y1 }/ R% T  K% X3 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  F8 T2 A3 V, e1 i6 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( K* K" q, g  k& Z5 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ }+ \/ [" d* ]+ x5 r  `, ?  N! J6 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 ~: m6 R: ~3 s( @7 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 g* ~1 Q) w) N6 q$ O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 c& [0 g, ?0 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 I' {0 @' S0 n& K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 f* H- h% M* A% h. r8 X2 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( {/ b+ K- D1 m6 b% U+ u* Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Y2 g6 F  D! D7 S( J$ y3 y3 N% S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) V. B  P" F/ ^# P, u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  b, G  A& {1 A; i7 |2 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 u8 M* c: j: t9 q, ?, F9 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' O3 |6 C* W( u6 l3 Y- M( V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ p! s0 k. `3 j$ l+ m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- Y8 w. X0 _# A' O% x* S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 [/ D9 s" ?, j9 Y* T7 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' z$ O( O5 o5 L6 m% K. k  U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' e2 I* `& B. R8 l" h8 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>