【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 e4 `! A$ H9 u& P8 C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! O" B% R: k6 o) ^$ C4 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 f/ s& s$ o5 h/ F3 [3 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( m6 H& ]5 V4 w2 k5 n- pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 G- T- D. Q6 J/ K# f, O% vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 K$ ~2 c* K9 S& JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, k( m5 m' D6 D$ t- a* W7 L" K* B5 Y9 aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# v; n+ S( _! Q; C- |Nothing can compare to my love
( @& S4 C# s( Q  ~* ?; KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ h+ V$ k4 {# g  h' O/ mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, I+ K4 U( r4 ^I’m still filled with fear
' [: b0 A0 r* M0 P, zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( a1 U9 p9 G5 i6 n  p+ T! u7 _I regret not dying
: Y* ?* x9 w/ Q6 `2 p, r" N0 G& `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% I1 X/ J5 x+ b2 VWith such a tongue as yours,
* a/ ^1 _4 q; aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ M$ O0 @- c! G6 u" T! r/ ]# ~* vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& c, F, @& i: B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ @% J; c9 i1 t  W1 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ~0 K' Z5 P2 I* X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 S9 f3 f0 \# e' F& |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% `5 n. `6 g) F& n* J/ ~0 w( @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- [- [1 g! t% X  Z, q" z( F4 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" M0 ^; d4 L7 m, r. L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; S- t! T& h, s* q9 r0 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 ^5 h: u1 M' w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ _, I# `; c; c3 Q2 A8 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 c1 x: x; o6 y4 B) ^8 L+ g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  T8 h  A7 w. _$ C; O  b" A. m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ V. j/ B5 x0 a: c3 p! o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# l! J' Y: @0 F+ T; X( \- Y+ c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ?# W# T) B7 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, t; x$ T) j! q9 B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ @* r7 K, D: T: {& z) p  a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* k) G! q# J0 l+ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 @2 V! M6 P% `2 z' Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' X) W2 y, Y" ~( ~1 [7 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 i0 C$ }3 a8 b  {6 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 X. m( ]' v# Y' |) K9 W' z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 C6 N: i1 ~  k, F: o! B' ]' l) z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' x' F, j+ Y+ d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* G1 f, g. v) I, k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. _5 ^; `) |6 t* Z. C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ t1 ~+ S4 s9 H  Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: I3 I) S  e, T; ]9 }. n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. V/ d) o3 a" K+ D1 d1 l我请你剖开它

! Q1 `8 @/ r  Z6 |5 p* F, ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 v2 _4 O* _' k3 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>