【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& i3 q- ~* y; L' `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ b' i$ [$ Q  A& O. |8 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ o. h9 C( q! c7 v. ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# Y, m7 W9 e7 v: z2 `Every other word you utter is love
8 b% H$ k3 Z3 X+ G% n! Y8 {& ?I really want to know just how much you love me
+ C7 T! `5 d; |3 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! b# T5 k1 _+ |! l( PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. c. c0 P+ G* m2 b" f! K3 k0 s' J3 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
, f/ H2 F- o. T4 M& I7 d  AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, O) Z  B9 U% t2 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' y# z& a* W+ b; s/ L/ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" M5 V+ A' K6 q- F1 z0 |7 B+ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 l) l7 E/ ~( B3 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ R# ^: `  d" k6 Z- Z4 D7 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& I0 ?+ [( [! a0 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 N5 F( D2 G: m: y; h* \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 `0 h1 g! m2 }$ a& z  ]* t. x& [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# y! R6 q; K* u- d1 Q% S; i1 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 w8 u; q1 Z4 R+ @; L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: G/ C# R+ |# M4 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 P$ R. k- B5 a9 m* L. `9 `" _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# N2 ~, i  ?  w( n6 d3 j/ `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- |: m, n" {8 u8 D8 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- `( c: `' h7 W8 e3 F/ H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. _+ n) q8 d" F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: {0 R5 g! a, t) Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 g$ _1 _+ b/ a; F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' ^: K, t" k" v9 c1 z7 \. B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 Z& V& f' P/ u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% L7 l8 ?/ F+ _5 u3 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# _) ]! a: ?" o. w- U1 i2 N$ J) K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 _( L- m3 p$ v5 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( Y  h% Q" }" A5 q( ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  r8 j. d& }" M: [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& \$ v0 g3 e) N' x4 l' |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ i/ L6 v& u* F$ |& X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! [' s9 ]+ |4 e; w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 }4 p* ~. F8 l9 \: m! T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# G' c" i: k% i: e4 y3 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 M' H3 ]' S) y: y, o; o# l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ @8 H. d) {/ G, F$ t8 q% M: D7 _+ N6 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! H2 t1 F1 e/ o0 R/ v% {& M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 A. O# l' {, y( y* o- a0 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>