【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* Q' i: |- w. ?/ y2 c歌词我附在后面。
' e) c8 {% f/ P9 c7 z( fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  j' h2 G2 V1 N& s# RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 o! O1 G  \9 Y8 f  F1 E, YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% t0 w. V; E# E% G2 H4 XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 R9 g) e, `: VYou needn’t fear anything
  f' G, o' M& W9 g0 X$ X* jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: ~, \" f2 e7 E' J+ u8 [% HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 k- n# w/ O' q5 Q$ j7 D: |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 D; g$ U' S# P( K8 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- `6 V- N7 q) ?3 R- C9 \  l" m2 nI’m still filled with fear
) Z) K5 \( ]( M5 @, I2 n# uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" F3 j, ~1 C; |+ mI regret not dying
3 v9 h1 A  z) I* e0 G. NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% \( B3 V, }2 F0 A* RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' j8 U( C5 U* c7 S4 B6 W9 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! B3 J- n4 f: W' ~1 I0 O) h% O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. s5 Y4 N* t# m+ K3 {7 M8 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 e0 p. m  F+ Q2 v' T; E/ _- G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ S& A3 Q0 O1 i/ _0 A  D# d$ C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: G: r2 O4 a; x( Y/ b8 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, m, C2 i% r: ^. d0 V" u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# f) W) m* p" D4 f8 F: y& J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 M9 O$ E- }+ B) n' X6 L- {: W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" W! U' G) Y9 A% t. A& X; N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( G) Q6 b; N! y4 `& o  F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) L* g. Q/ i. P5 A. k, h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 B6 C" u) ]. R4 |1 g5 T  z  V# s3 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- E9 f; z* V5 K) D0 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 Y. V1 c* D  A/ a6 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ]2 W  t3 P: O/ e& ~# s2 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 N# `6 d  [2 }3 i: ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, J9 b, J& [; r& h+ o5 b: c; w$ I0 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ Z* e3 L# z: G  I- r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ c- ^9 ^' @) ~4 Z! S. O8 q; z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ N- `" y" C, p3 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  h6 ?5 t1 c) A: Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 Q- m& c. f0 e0 [- q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 f* G. [# [' t7 [0 W0 [1 l) d" v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, A& `; V5 r6 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>