【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Y) ?: o% v# T$ f1 G5 W8 S  w歌词我附在后面。
5 O) q8 B9 V$ O+ K% kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' P6 M- Y  o* }( H- k% kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) g  T5 a4 Y8 R. ^  WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( E4 s; v1 ^; p( B# sSeeing the sky content with its love
4 `- ?$ x7 g1 A: YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( d& I+ n0 D1 J3 c/ zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ C( m8 ~2 ^; m: ~  MI love you I love you with all my heart
; U* h' K8 H1 M# o7 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  o6 ]( s5 ]& o) pI want so much to see inside your heart
# J( {- Z% M: _  p& QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  N# `* q. ~' q$ ]I’m still filled with fear
( D. O$ x) b2 |/ wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) r1 `# c8 r% m; {2 ~: J4 WI regret not dying
. t+ u1 d# P2 |3 u2 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) m0 J$ t: V1 B5 t9 k- C& iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 ]2 I3 l! v1 `3 k7 I. w3 z1 i( {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% J5 j6 @( ^: P" k% h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  {/ X9 J2 M) y1 x0 y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( A1 ^; ]% r0 V6 z/ E7 B* G4 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) p+ {' Y, Z. \) P3 i4 Q7 E* _; r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 q6 [4 b" t! N  n9 Y" o* K9 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: o8 S& }2 {9 L( p- U& k' P& ^3 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' Q3 i+ V" O* [' F" q. [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 k' p  O8 V, s0 H  w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: B8 U: m$ K8 M0 U: X: @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. |2 f5 m9 b( [$ ^0 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" X3 I# v: }. q9 Z9 Z% C2 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. L5 F6 P* }2 I& s! I1 L% M% c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% _& {( b6 |8 ]) q3 _* V' A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: |; c! \7 u4 }% y: [2 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# B  T4 f- E0 x/ d. W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 z3 k* ?' g$ z% ~9 c  @- {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 [- z! C/ J1 ^' Z$ c" b% \9 K; E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 J, }; w! V( o$ u2 [1 \% c2 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' p. r# M2 Z; P) o, L4 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& ]0 K+ T1 ^9 C; V0 H  g  C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* z+ l3 J, g6 Z5 z" l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 i' t6 M; B4 r: |; F, }# }" a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( g: V& ?- p* f7 B' A0 o6 w9 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' C  ~- V" w7 k) i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ u+ G1 S, P. w1 K% Y  v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ]+ Q+ \2 M  c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 M* i$ P6 U0 p( L6 _$ Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' o3 L" z; g, ]/ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 Y$ i# q$ x2 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>