【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 @/ Z* e' @, uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; d; z2 ~) X& S: z! N( OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 L8 X9 e9 P1 R  {/ g- A& N# WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" x9 \- }: e$ kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 S( c: y8 e5 s6 }% h+ l& YThe sky is happy down to its soul
; e) R; Q6 N: J- A9 c7 Y, @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 E, g$ I. T3 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 o: }  j/ c8 E+ M% ]- j" KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 `9 _$ J1 b& l' P7 C1 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ l& L" K" d  N7 _0 v7 V! d# T* yI want so much to see inside your heart
/ l" a) q; N% cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, i# Z- S9 o( sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- W, @0 @' a5 n! G6 {; n3 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& j, A  c9 G4 v+ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ D6 o0 J( p7 n  I, m: f/ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 W- P* n2 m! Z: Z! k% u1 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, ]( l; i  o; {" k" w8 n. R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ w. q* `6 J- L$ Z' V% Z  Q  M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& H1 D2 t# C+ \1 t6 J( ]' r2 O' \. F, j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ G, a2 g0 P) L* u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& E3 i1 N: w' u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( q; f% ^9 q: Z, u: Q+ ?' Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 g6 \2 E1 e+ F$ Z; k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 G' d6 g9 ]& Z7 {2 L) Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" f+ }. F" p2 y$ v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 q2 ^2 \; p4 A0 `# M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 u3 e2 p: ?$ s6 [& w! i% N<P>你无需担心</P>
2 @& Y# b8 J: m  ?) U4 Z' M- Q9 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! {8 A3 _) w& E8 o# W4 M3 T! m* q' u1 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ T8 Q0 i6 A7 ^9 P- F' F0 x7 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& X: h7 v: y, `. Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 q& ]3 f& O: H5 |: L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& \9 ^8 ]* Z9 ]* O7 D# l1 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 t( T2 D, }9 b) E4 G+ U& E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* f  ?3 P8 E3 ^  d* @. _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 A0 G( a& ^+ t4 i: {0 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( O2 A4 H% x# w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( H" a4 E3 q1 {1 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# M6 Z* U: j; l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 v! W7 a3 m2 N: P, S( x8 y2 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# U1 J  X+ F: Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) ^: g" O" Q( e! _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ X  U. ?# q3 `9 x9 T! k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 J0 n- X2 L8 k( T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 u: A1 o0 _$ l# V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>