【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# q; T4 R+ n4 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 x8 e1 E4 f) G+ z! C! U& e6 o( xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 f8 Y$ n( n+ U3 F- C5 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* A# [7 R& H+ M4 \$ KYou needn’t fear anything
& f! d" l1 k7 o$ E  IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) q1 G! |$ P4 \, X6 lI really want to know just how much you love me
2 h. o- W. h8 n) i# VI love you I love you with all my heart
( l. W4 Q( T2 J+ p% f0 P# CNothing can compare to my love
2 J) H6 a0 N5 H) \) ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ x2 O# V4 S' Y* }. ?I’m still filled with fear
% u7 R8 e4 y$ M+ T7 y2 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) I: A: }3 l+ K1 gI regret not dying
" V0 r- V. D: y+ G1 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ x: _2 A3 }9 Q% ?, kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 Z4 Y) ^& Z1 m* J: CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, R# M5 l- ]8 \3 @/ K0 r- nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; \' p0 M3 ^+ [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* f) F/ W, V( `/ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( n2 w; W. t+ @2 p4 [# Z0 m! j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 S' G, y+ a& E/ \0 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( u% C2 m7 d" i; D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 F+ ]% k1 j# @3 D+ q, g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 S8 w% D1 n6 q& Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  P3 H6 D  |4 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 _# V3 ?1 g1 p( Q5 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 p9 f7 m5 ?; `7 F: o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 I5 o9 |1 e2 N7 }6 s<P>你无需担心</P>
5 k* ?! L5 m! n8 H$ z% u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) S6 l2 Q; q: u: X' _# x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 @# t' T6 T% ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ k$ w" s) n+ |8 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( v- l3 o+ a7 o: R* A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; W6 v7 P, Z+ {: J5 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& u4 R1 ^! a4 i3 Q* u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 K% U2 X$ S2 A! _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 f) K9 r9 k  \$ g" f# V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. t3 T9 v. `0 b6 @# `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- ~& @4 z8 r2 z1 E: _/ C' U: s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& {  |  ^9 W# x0 X# f- e, B( ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 \5 e5 T6 T) Y2 h' c! f2 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 O* a) U1 `& ^1 l  K% F7 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! ?3 d3 {7 Z* A4 U. x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>