【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 u. _  x$ m( |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# T2 S: P, ?; ]$ vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# h% |) d. p! v( x" a8 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 h& z' N% e, J( e2 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 ?" S+ M# E+ _, X2 uWith the moon kissing it every night
0 ]1 e/ s; v7 P2 z& T! xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 j4 w% P4 n4 a: OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. G4 J3 R' i6 \2 U7 Z1 {$ E8 uI really want to know just how much you love me
& {# h; J; P+ |0 _$ r% u; II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  @- w  L0 y  H' iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 M* X- ~1 P" O( {, tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- `, a1 o6 i6 U4 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ]9 I& k9 n3 HWith such a tongue as yours,
8 E% _9 y, F! s1 D; X( O6 {8 ?# ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; S6 S2 ^% J2 X* ?3 z/ s: h3 Z( \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* ^8 z8 \" a3 i& S$ d5 _, G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 ?" }7 I8 |$ S5 A9 I0 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 n' u4 U+ a5 w, J( x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 X% q4 [1 w7 N4 D$ C5 q5 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# ?$ O  l- ?2 y& d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 [2 T; y/ h  }+ T( h8 z, X1 n+ a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 {% p( [9 i5 w. I4 J. ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; W2 ?; l* }( G; d* K# d* v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: q7 M( m+ F- q& o% M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 m" P, u0 k: s9 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( g* D6 N5 R0 v4 Z4 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) x5 a- Q: a6 X( Q7 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* h, I. O$ s3 k. ]5 P: h! _5 b% r5 [! z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ o# p- O& T9 k1 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 `  O% [- T% N# n: J& O8 U  A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% b5 L7 R3 y0 O1 k% f4 v  C0 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! O- @( N/ @* F/ O9 Y9 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ M6 t9 D) S6 a# @' ]; V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) R' U2 {  B& p# X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Y" u: \  g& n0 [: n<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 G3 L1 ], o6 O& c# ~& ?% U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; Y$ S0 i% l( [$ K. }9 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' r! O1 A/ V  ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; P. o0 a5 ~0 K9 U, C9 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* u1 ^5 C; B  g4 p6 B! p/ N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, G, Q2 a/ W; k: E! b: t, E' u1 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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1 z5 }1 b2 Y1 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% R7 k& {! S  Z: j" O/ A! w9 X/ J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>