【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  U1 j! t4 z/ |6 ~$ @歌词我附在后面。
$ F/ F5 @2 g) g; S4 J, K) sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; \2 f' s% E5 F1 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  b$ W# g7 B6 b% d0 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& R+ p/ ?1 H& P) j( m( SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! `. `! Z& s# y% Y# i& b/ E; rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 ]5 _( o' o- \/ C* YSeeing the sky content with its love
! f0 I$ D3 h1 `3 o3 h+ N# H0 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 s) U0 v% \$ M& MYou needn’t fear anything
4 O7 N5 q/ x. M  D- OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) M5 |: k# ]  j: h  r* VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ t$ v9 W, n: FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 w) A1 D1 E' }/ Z; ], l7 S% TI’m still filled with fear
. D) E2 s; e7 i6 z: X9 r- tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 h. X& ~% r3 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  W8 U" k8 B- ^5 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) f1 g+ M9 _5 }3 U' q4 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* }! L4 U  ?- a- ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 H! N( Z( a& j/ J1 d( T, r4 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ X- F, [  n) z2 O7 T& F; _0 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ Z- f9 f0 i% J/ a8 i# l* K; @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* M1 m$ g7 x' x) m; T' s- h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; O9 T7 F; ^1 ]! P/ W- q  w# ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: @: D: V& q0 H& Y8 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( C7 u& a* C$ Y+ P0 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ a* x+ z/ N, R/ v  j$ Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 \3 J3 X3 L$ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ?% T- d; I2 R8 V; H/ G. s2 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ t1 F; W% Z1 _) l0 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  N8 G: h* B  X1 j9 z, c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 T) @! G$ {0 N! q& ^) h: o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ h0 K% {6 Y' X7 }6 t/ m<P>你无需担心</P>
7 [2 L, N1 |6 M# P+ D' G4 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 v* m8 h8 b6 P" [: K& ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- h4 x0 o: }, p* f8 n, N9 [) {% z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  k+ `* z  _; o; {! B( ]7 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; p! M% c& h3 C/ h4 M* }  E1 D. O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 F# f$ x) I/ W. p) {# D# j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- F; i) k+ o" v5 k8 a$ |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 O: _% d- D$ z' d6 `) ?* }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) ]7 D, S/ A( d% Q" y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 a( d" w* R: N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, Y8 Q' b4 t( D  N4 t2 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 q8 Z& d: u1 s6 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# n# `4 m' E- x4 ~; p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% V( H. f" ~; y. k9 U  j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 f- C* z: Q3 B* D( u: n# U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' h! @& p# {" O" Y0 b4 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: l) q( Q; \1 t7 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ h3 @$ K% P! N! y( T/ A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# J3 ^: e7 A8 p# x3 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: g2 N, h* K' B; Y1 k' m; u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>