【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 `5 ?( O+ n& }4 N5 b  C" k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  a5 I5 A  ^2 Y: x7 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* _/ ?5 e1 d# ^3 ~% B5 |) z* d" Q0 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( V. `  ^9 e" LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ [7 b, G8 P3 v8 NEvery other word you utter is love
. p2 N# w- c0 z! V" G! P# ?; W( SI really want to know just how much you love me
/ B$ M0 }2 A! r! H! PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" i: Q" o# Q4 m7 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  ]- _: G4 J$ ]! ~8 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( h3 e$ [/ k3 V; o) H) {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 v% j/ J0 N/ S, {  X7 {! EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  m. r6 R' O3 V: V- Y4 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 U; M, _, W; i7 }% l5 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) p6 Y$ h, }, [- w  `* `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* i3 l7 A: A6 P  T! v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ ?& L! n  t8 o6 i( s4 @+ X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: C8 S& l; q8 t" D! I- ~  C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 {! D7 {+ s1 h7 v' X9 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; |" P# a( \; z- w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ R) o( Y; |! p" J# K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" \% t7 b  w% K) b5 J9 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' U9 Y% C4 v: h2 Z, _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 B( O: N7 i: o  Q# g% g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ U- }& O7 P) @3 E8 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ e% W3 b) X  {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 b( a3 y0 H, c8 H4 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 E0 }- D5 R* T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Z5 L2 r, l9 b8 s+ m  C8 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; Q0 s2 Y- j/ O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% C, p9 o; W& E6 I1 Z9 V8 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' H- {5 ?5 N8 f8 [" V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' C; _1 Y. V( {/ x+ E( z" o8 l9 Z/ Y: J1 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 d. c7 @" X7 @& Y" t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  a+ L- J2 n+ {3 g% z9 n, @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 f4 i6 ^/ @/ h- ?$ h; }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 c  O9 ~8 _! M3 g' @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ s, D2 T) e! a* p; p+ E, r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! K9 Q3 A2 ?/ Z3 R5 ~& x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; {6 [2 P1 T+ S: K) V; W5 R( c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  O' e3 C4 `5 K0 ]' D# X; r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! k1 J' X( Y0 B: C/ N4 {5 I' A8 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& v# w: Y) }9 A, [1 z' C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 |! {% J9 K- }1 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, |) l4 f* V6 P. \, C* b- e" V" h) I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: V$ W0 ?' }  U- Z; s# s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 \( P# y9 {8 C8 N% j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* v) I- W( p% @& w  P* m; W9 h, [7 F我请你剖开它
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+ T% I6 i( Q0 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>