【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' x" ^3 l( a  L7 |( bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& v( p2 x) G) s- s9 m3 ]1 S% t) mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 L% b" B# C% h5 e" vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ~. F9 _) Z+ D) }6 I2 M* O. ~! GThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ f. u1 }; H# k0 w# HWith the moon kissing it every night
" T( b7 _% a4 ]" ~8 `# d0 NSeeing the sky content with its love
/ e0 z$ X4 S+ z7 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' @, n3 D( K0 J& m- t* GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 z+ u  F' m, Z1 w, l: oEvery other word you utter is love
% f/ K# J. B& l9 L" ^I really want to know just how much you love me
# Y# H: E# V8 ^1 _- C+ nI love you I love you with all my heart
- b+ d" e! V. n# F3 h& |; n+ rNothing can compare to my love
! [$ ]& t% `+ p4 o" y* k/ lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ L+ f+ Y9 j9 T) n( ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; _; R7 W2 D) l: w& NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 {4 f- S) v" h, N( xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' j# l0 u2 |4 p8 B( ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ i; l/ \( H1 c0 ]4 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: J, Y# a/ m$ B. y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( W; ?1 I+ B; q- Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' }5 p7 v- L5 E' {/ A! ?4 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 v- \. J8 r. v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 I' a) D+ T# ?" b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# Y/ I% C. M( u9 [' [8 J: I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ A8 P$ {# _% ]( [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 x; O# Q! o1 W5 b: d* c5 b8 x$ O& p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& m; b8 G6 w; G& ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" r% a4 n( g. R) \8 {& P% J0 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" K" V5 X8 z* _4 J: l0 f+ r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 J( n! C, N* z& }" x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' A, J; W  ]: c" X9 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 o# w) N: m, A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' L( z0 }! r: A! Q- m+ ]2 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 Z4 }/ s8 t' V+ {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' O" K6 X- ], L6 ^/ P, _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: s0 [7 V. M6 ~& c% \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ?7 `5 ?8 I$ M4 v) _! E# w3 R8 P2 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) n5 d+ }, T) H6 ~* Z" S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 d8 Q  w3 @: s3 D0 G- C/ i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 \4 S, {" q+ t: `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" X  e" q& b( `( L  s' m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! B3 E" F4 B: S. o% ^' q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ]3 A% S& T0 B+ t2 ~) q我请你剖开它
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: T; d1 @% W/ }/ F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 a: r/ V0 ^* X9 b2 |3 i4 O( I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>