【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( v1 m( R* q$ @: d" v5 `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! ^& \7 E- J6 B8 X  DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 v  B; g' a" D7 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' [) b6 S3 o: s9 \0 f# o" q, M) _9 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- |% t( M; d. {$ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
- M3 h# O( a" t1 [- @7 f, |/ nWith the moon kissing it every night
- _4 }* j8 U, J8 W7 {5 B/ X" uSeeing the sky content with its love
. c. q1 w0 S  h- T# _' |5 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- j( K, U: ?2 `! s3 `3 o3 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ A5 g: V; E" E( X5 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) M3 Y9 y% Q; wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% ^" r3 d( B, _  Q0 V& g' `6 k- gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& T1 _9 a, p) z9 M/ EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 L6 e( G7 X. N" E* sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! l5 G- s: }7 h: y' [6 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' J7 k6 g  \% r2 e* |, k* P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 W1 E1 {  Q! u) U- @1 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- H" A. B( |& J3 i5 O* q8 o  o$ K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 W# p) k+ I# A+ x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 n, Z( D% {6 c; T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ T$ r/ m9 e* |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: i; g% |. Q5 S  @* q# d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# @$ `1 Q8 O! D& l( F8 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 J- \  w6 O6 X- s) F$ D; s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& U& Z3 k% b8 w) t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ]$ Y+ y5 ~+ a4 a7 O9 p<P>你无需担心</P>
' H% v; P: x! `/ n) Y% b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 T/ `  ?+ b  c7 l' z! Z3 y; V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, ]- a* h# C" Q2 H- x4 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! T, j/ H0 T5 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" [- N, o  H: L0 x# |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 i/ K( ]) v5 V5 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* _/ I# V  s( ^) K) U# ?2 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& N/ P& E; H* v% t1 x1 c& ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ v6 C2 E7 G- S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 ^3 t, Q5 Q, v! n7 x. f3 z3 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( s9 p# d. Q3 i+ `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& q  v. J3 S0 K0 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& D2 v' Z# N* `- b( [6 l3 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 v5 p; y. z0 ]& M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( J: W5 [7 N. r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; P3 o& U2 ]+ I) @' `3 @3 K: c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 m- l9 r. @6 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ {% d. p5 X' o# H7 e. `6 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) c1 G: b3 e# @7 u1 m9 G# [4 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 ?& R3 x% S& Z3 P6 K# A0 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ l+ W& b1 p# {) \: m1 `! f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>