【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ C9 B2 D% W! ^& u/ ~3 p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: g& Z7 w8 F7 v& e4 {* ]2 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 g1 W; K1 B0 d0 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' ?1 M7 D1 R, T4 _" OThe sky is happy down to its soul
; z0 {" V8 q+ yWith the moon kissing it every night
  }; Q9 F" B, ?. M) qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; [; ]/ L% B2 VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 D+ ]5 j  @- t$ y! _3 MNothing can compare to my love
/ j1 p( O" m" C" \" {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  v" _# \. g' B0 Z( u1 R1 ~8 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  t2 @$ L1 m* g2 t0 K" e. Q5 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  D5 q" t! l4 H8 G4 D# Q* kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# n/ J8 `& P' pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) l6 B9 ]& i: oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  Z, ?, Y" _. @5 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 T) K( L0 p/ CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: G3 F( n6 d5 h' o7 }) ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 ?% p, g, m' @+ R9 I. ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! J; y% @6 }9 [6 V) P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ \/ B$ Y) U" _8 V! ^& I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& h' b% \( r* F7 g3 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* h; T, P4 h) i9 S5 @& b. O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  i7 y5 d9 N" E8 ]( H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( m  F! N/ b2 W& J8 v1 g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- L- |2 d) P+ D( d0 Q) x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 p+ s( m* `) Y( Q+ z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ S8 {: B- |7 N1 Q: O/ h( Z* Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( @3 t4 \5 k% E6 s( e0 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 y9 t. {2 F0 K: j1 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. f  R# W& Z$ c0 s<P>你无需担心</P>
4 }: h2 J& h7 I# t; h  t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 w) X' X2 J' M) Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 P& D* L# d. W8 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' }9 {* `1 b( `. s2 z4 ^4 w: d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 q' k& N8 P9 d6 {) W9 U" P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% F# n) w, F9 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; @' @0 R7 {. }7 Z7 u3 \0 S' P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 R; C) G+ ?; ]9 j' K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ R. V) }% a$ O7 H+ |8 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 V8 k0 e7 Y* Q2 K1 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 o9 E) l. ?" T4 M/ L: Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# Z7 }$ M+ y5 q- E( E: I: _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 z4 g! Q2 m: _& `- z, J* ?, G<P>I regret not dying</P>
( w1 |7 q9 w9 w! s9 R* @7 j. L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& F  H% ?3 d9 E; J8 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 S. Z9 m6 B# x3 y: i" r$ [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( L. c3 i# I1 [1 t, B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" y3 M: u5 o9 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! K2 j9 i  p3 }- k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 g& L0 d+ E, {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

4 h0 Z  m1 M2 V8 [# P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>