【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, ^# l" c% A7 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" \; T# W2 A  H5 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ k) ?* f5 s* L) m! e, `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 Y3 L1 J* {2 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# w0 A0 f, Z, T% R  Q3 {1 WEvery other word you utter is love
: S6 y8 p6 `. c1 i3 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* L. e5 _& F/ c3 g, pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# L+ I, {. x) F) w! t! yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  V7 m9 H9 K# E9 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, c* D" A/ l6 w) fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  K( G+ Q: T* }8 M0 s+ yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 f5 c! u/ F5 u$ ?  `: }! H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ~( V+ V; R9 m* z! W' r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 M+ E8 i- M# t# f& H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 p# U: H* b' `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# A& [5 F* R, E7 X- o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; d/ F) p" w! o1 H1 \! Y2 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% l) A# i( A" z, O1 ?( c) l/ _3 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 K$ w  h7 D# K2 N- b( h% A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 E9 [3 w  p- Q6 h; a- R* j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 G: ~+ d) p8 ^+ @  w$ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 d9 v. U2 T5 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 _, l  k. g8 {) T% P. c/ ~) u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, Y) r/ z$ ^! p5 E$ U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 g5 c- O# w: w  x1 I' Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' n( V2 S1 S& Q9 [1 N' v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- j$ v$ j  x: d1 U7 w4 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 v8 l. L: V) ?8 N7 c. J- C2 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! @- f: m: W$ {3 e4 G/ x  E$ y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; w4 i& K5 Q% P8 w7 P8 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. i4 W& S; y; O+ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" _2 V( o, R. h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: Z. [5 x+ \  l* K6 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 m1 k4 D2 ~+ [! N* s: O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, j) A3 |; ?& t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 W  \) R  o, V) B3 |1 }* a8 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; L( P0 J' l$ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) J( A. D$ l8 l5 ~: o' d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) B2 O2 a2 z0 B" s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& _8 A* s8 r7 e' Z  P% r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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