【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  C" G0 `  m. s' ^% P5 M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 Z$ W0 t( s: X+ E1 u: ?3 u3 I6 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! r: r5 N, k. c- tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( A7 L. n% Q! dThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ z1 A. @; F! U$ nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! f. z" ?& }7 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' J9 K  p7 n  Y. \3 P8 U1 |) g& LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- @0 L7 }1 v- h5 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  X4 H' C! J2 p/ VI’m still filled with fear
; Y) j- X& H% V1 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! {: h! I9 t, C; _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 J( K3 o# F  O+ n* n7 h6 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ e- b) Y" h  k' [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 m+ q- N% M1 [$ y* V: ?; ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) T1 D7 H/ E1 w4 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# m, H* h' H% t5 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( N9 T3 W7 U, d& I4 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; S  B5 Y6 F. i7 S/ _( J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. o: A; M9 o( P! [4 a% Y+ G( ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 g+ f% F: ~) D4 N' v1 S+ z. h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 q/ r1 p  z% n0 A* ~: }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 O' P  x! V3 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" L7 m1 G. }) L4 f0 w! B& J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( S+ q% h! c' N$ S* u/ g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ g/ x/ f( Q! }9 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% f( h$ q( `+ w* }( J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ G* p' M6 M5 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 L( B. q/ V( d* t; a$ F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 \3 K. A( Y3 @' f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% z# J& V& \+ N5 c3 Q3 ?8 q1 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 K8 H( l. i, u  V2 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! W5 @2 h7 l: q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& |2 d9 k+ N% b+ V$ q" u9 A" R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# d5 {3 ~& d# S+ U+ l- |& Z0 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! Q) o$ |! ^+ h! c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 ]& t+ |' j2 q( F, I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& C8 {; O8 g& K; a1 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# g+ c1 @" J' S- Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 [/ E1 p) }6 L; E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# X9 S1 F4 J* I! F' I6 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) k$ `, Y+ z8 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 ]5 M9 x* v9 d8 Q9 d' w1 m. A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. `5 s" q  g: U  T9 s% {, f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>