【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) R/ `* [+ ^8 ^+ ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# I' Y% G4 r* y: Q7 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  N6 R8 i8 q* z$ r7 f6 @7 d6 Z* OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 H" F1 F0 k; p6 n0 k8 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- i7 N. G+ z3 O" u5 \) jI love you I love you with all my heart
! a/ ]/ Z1 Z# l) T8 r  K- T9 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ E, \3 a: r3 @$ g% q: Q; i8 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( F! p& n) }7 T, wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) _2 \( q. `# L4 ~' pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" l% c9 C- j3 P; l0 c/ x1 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 a" v* i( d. k, s9 b- X7 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, m  }7 K: Q% `. c" C3 B" a. z: V0 [9 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 k' B' V- |; N, k$ j# r$ E1 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 b- w+ @5 b5 h# ?+ {2 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 V: s) [4 R) W' x+ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 E( v2 T. v1 Y. X: i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 U2 r5 M! \2 ^$ d0 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* Z. [, e  m1 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% G" \' [$ }6 {/ q6 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 b( N1 ~! g0 b6 t% ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) k3 v- Z1 A/ c  x' I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 d: c+ m) ]0 _4 k! v% d1 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 N8 Z% R8 w2 L, R! ]4 m9 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 i5 Y' B* |: ~. [/ R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; x- B$ h: n* O3 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ Y$ o/ b) E: |* d# J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 W+ J( y! c7 {, Z' Z0 l+ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ @9 {2 s) H) Y- [  J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) w3 N. ?( ]3 J& [- j4 S* z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ c: j0 L1 _1 x* ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# ?- g; r( H0 `. e1 s5 c/ Q$ n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# O5 b6 t. c; E0 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& V) A- L( H/ X  S3 W9 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 ?/ H  G( n+ n; X0 H; _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' f% I; _( D/ ?" Z7 r4 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 i( F5 W5 a7 P# I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- t# d* V* {- }: D) }: U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 B1 q+ v2 F& E( \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- a" Y) W3 P+ ^/ D; H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' d7 t: U# n5 F- n; j# J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- i8 W) t+ @0 y2 Y: ^) t我请你剖开它

% B  r: @5 r. R' ], J3 F" C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>