【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' Z, L% ?0 R/ A8 D- S# Z* Q$ qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 {+ F* Y5 P/ iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 Z/ O1 [. R$ q' U0 r0 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; ^3 p( w$ w; M3 ^! JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: o" d# Z3 u0 k, T- qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 G/ T6 C$ l% e- kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) B) R5 D4 V  N# |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 E" s  k9 [6 S0 P. z: k4 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 k- o! {$ y6 [1 V  MI want so much to see inside your heart
  e6 p- m  `* d& Q2 X& ~! @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 G$ j7 g: B, }2 N! E" h. j$ VI’m still filled with fear
0 u8 t  f7 f1 b# ?4 n4 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ \: b: I7 u6 J) ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ y, F6 ?4 i0 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. U, h" S+ r  k8 b8 E  w% x4 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# X" x! |9 z9 \3 D, Y2 K$ j7 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, p5 x7 z# l2 J1 F5 u2 ?4 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& p: l- W; k5 i2 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# p  X" F3 \7 X9 U& s6 }$ y% M- u% q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* S6 Q0 E% f) P3 B/ F1 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 G  |- _) [' s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ z! b5 O* t, k/ @+ M8 c" b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 R7 n. y; c7 z1 {5 K( B" k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( w0 M, K7 ^1 Z0 k! L4 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. A. N4 |* n& _: L: n+ b; t% S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 _+ D' c! d9 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 @/ @) R. @2 O9 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 q+ e$ d4 [2 b. d  z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# S/ k, C+ i7 w7 O9 v# \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% ~, w4 d7 k- Q2 z  B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( K- T& |* |3 z& j4 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 B, l, `) P+ T: B$ U) |2 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# U6 k4 S# C! _4 l  ]6 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 J7 L: I; b$ Y3 d- x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) w2 e* R$ Z& U3 u( Y# _% s& w. @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* ?- X/ d! }. Z) _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- y; Q* l. ?$ S' x; K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% |* {1 X0 Q3 m# G$ u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* S1 [+ l9 D$ u6 C8 P% P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 k0 N4 m/ S1 o, w9 S2 c! q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 x4 w2 w' {3 h! x' ~: S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% g7 ^6 x- Y# J我请你剖开它
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7 J5 ~+ c0 J/ C7 n- ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>