【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ D1 P  `- H+ Q8 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# U* n' V# Q: \' o! T) L0 `& FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# h; i6 P  S; C9 N- H. w. d' {9 _# fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 B% Z+ \0 \6 M5 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; i% O4 m1 C# u1 x7 u3 C6 p2 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( f% H- q+ g& b1 J: V2 @2 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ J/ B+ W; J8 d8 m& UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, ~/ M  b. A% J6 q* a$ T, }  yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ T6 Q5 S* ~4 I) |" w$ mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 W0 f& Z: I, g5 S' z8 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' @3 |2 C! x8 v; ]7 e% Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. A! S+ t. H, I' n, K7 v, A5 p6 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ S: b* E% {1 c% Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  D- v1 D' d- p0 x  _  _6 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, y0 J/ P7 i; L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: j9 g5 H' H! w0 |6 n  ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' P0 w# J" f( @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 `$ i+ Q' a* ^+ j5 S3 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 \' D5 m; X% {  f9 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% W( B6 O# z- p) n' d2 d  q& z& q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 _2 r% m5 r" L1 d" e8 B' S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 h2 W8 }) A. v1 x: l# f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. R: n" H* ^/ I$ p2 y3 ]* N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. n. m  q9 q9 ~* p. V: q/ p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- r, E4 l7 W1 Z& w5 [6 Y0 l1 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 z& k4 B7 X2 k; k+ d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" H  N6 @2 i- R, k0 j2 r/ S( k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# E/ |, G( @8 K' F- H# q, {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 }* a7 }' i2 }! U. U/ w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) T) R; J" R7 E' T$ K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ P6 H, `- M6 l* b1 u3 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ @% L  S/ b: ~. g% M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: }7 i$ k0 u( C0 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 _+ w" d3 U, N" W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 R# }0 ^. D/ _2 \4 w" z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: k: ?6 T% v3 K/ ^7 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 b0 q# {. z8 M5 p: f+ H' d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, S7 x6 `, Y3 p( R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 A2 W! F1 ~; O. a0 h% x3 P' j; S* X( m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>