【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 e- |+ W5 q2 N* |* ~- hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ c1 Y4 s/ I0 F5 ~( @1 z  JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( [& B; t) u: o) O0 Z; T7 w  J, q8 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ~' N0 s7 r/ S7 Q! T* xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& T& I0 y# `( _+ ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. A# H  O9 f& P& Y% L* ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) E% }% x9 Q% B; N' hI want so much to see inside your heart
5 ^) ^7 U$ t1 |0 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' \8 s. C0 }# I0 A0 b+ m% KI’m still filled with fear
0 O( x- i0 ]- m9 O' \7 h& ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 u4 Z: q+ W2 G$ z: |& R( yI regret not dying
4 `# d/ B8 e3 p) {- R, B, BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! w- U, j5 k" m1 Y; {: B9 X1 @With such a tongue as yours,
0 {/ j7 A) B: F1 q* NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ }% v+ W- J# L. r9 C' ]. WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: y  v; R, D; W  h$ U: w  b1 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 A# {; q9 J0 i: Y& h4 n* h1 d' q. ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 S6 Z7 d' T( g1 N! H% M  e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* z; G% o' Z" n8 ~. b9 m8 S' P" Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# c* r* a! \  m& U5 ~" _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 f& O; Q9 s+ ?4 D4 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 t' E# P- {, _2 ~0 _, L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; u  \+ J! a1 ?6 A% i2 g<P>你无需担心</P>
, }4 I4 B7 _- V1 `* o9 E& s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; k% g5 r" a5 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 s1 \2 s9 H' N" A  ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ ?9 b5 f2 l8 h9 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 m$ y5 E9 A( \: v$ L0 N9 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" {. f; q$ l& N; _6 C- I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' }) K; ?. D# `3 U7 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 s! t8 K* {# `; u0 t' b$ G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 H) X1 d* Q- i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 m, ]7 N! \$ Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! G# O. p0 ?  G! [) r; j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) G- }1 Z3 U7 w6 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 z- B5 T/ A+ Y. C5 G% E6 m: l<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 B% H& Q1 A. ^# L* _7 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 U/ G$ X0 l: h( r. e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ d) q# w6 D5 x1 q+ f3 C6 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  a( w9 f# t( z/ j2 x3 z( e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ?% l% x' n$ e2 `' @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 b- E+ h9 j+ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ g1 A' i0 m5 f/ g+ |# g. N$ ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 a" K5 E- N; A# o! `; m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>