【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 \( ~/ E1 M2 z9 b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* K" C) L  F* e5 V& Z2 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) ~- n  c  y3 c- t3 s9 j' ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 q) L4 e) r- v, q  V; D% [The sky is happy down to its soul
) a* l: }1 R$ {* s5 i, G4 C" q) uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 y( l2 H5 _4 @. `You needn’t fear anything
4 G9 m. ?* H# E% F  KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 i3 D2 T. R: T: ?# pI really want to know just how much you love me
8 f8 v, c. H7 u6 y4 n, P( bI love you I love you with all my heart
, Z; \2 y( D2 w( J8 `Nothing can compare to my love
, D; ^5 {% [$ s5 _1 j! Q( [- oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" Z6 q/ L9 a1 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 O9 D7 w. M5 kI’m still filled with fear
) B8 n7 S* T) ]% }6 w! i4 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 C& n% J) O6 N. T: T7 \1 {: ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, q9 b, x% L% a. y0 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 J1 _- b6 l" ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- c7 x7 v; o- Z& d8 E5 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 w/ {: `# }+ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ j* p' W9 [! U& q. z/ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ ]# E8 y& N* R4 d5 D' s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! U4 @6 J  A: W# _8 n+ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# m  t% u7 i7 p5 f+ g6 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ C  \7 D! G1 D; s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 L4 P8 D; k# |5 G. D9 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 u/ u( e( G1 m1 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  T6 p9 e3 C, s! `+ q& v<P>你无需担心</P>
/ D' d/ A/ f% ?2 n. S/ A7 I; w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 t' Q8 w3 W2 ^  U4 l4 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" }& v" W2 ^: B$ u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. t$ p$ t% H5 w( Y$ x0 U5 q0 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  U! ~$ w; U/ w8 ~9 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: @1 a' F* u$ _8 ?! ^# H4 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ E5 q% E- c0 e3 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* g8 O6 @" p* L* \" K) J3 O+ x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# ?6 c1 N0 O) n1 X- `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" o$ o% h% F) V# Z% @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 S0 q, ]; M( x: D' ~- p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" M/ @, W. J% h% p" f9 I- n6 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) G: t' h+ d" J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% R# B  r, d  F  g" p# R  k3 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! A# L2 D$ K  {$ j* }' H' ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 O& i* B- X$ ~. W$ ]/ g- t  r- b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" O/ P% V9 j- C6 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 v1 H+ Z( l$ j' w: N5 N' j. g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# O! t! T3 M0 T2 H! g% f5 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# V: O0 t5 e. @! \" \' `2 b& h0 n! @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 v& t& l- i5 O7 n, D2 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% K( e0 Z% u8 P: l) p! L$ J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# q" O+ {( D5 b* |. E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, m  {; u* o3 F2 X8 |( \0 l# ~" U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>