【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 @5 o- o/ a% O% }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ |; u3 d5 a& e# C' [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, F7 E, q0 g9 n5 ^2 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 G7 P6 u7 {5 x/ rWith the moon kissing it every night
+ _& ?3 {1 W5 o6 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' H1 g. g+ d  T* {, VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ]# G+ ]# A5 Y) L$ _/ ~( O, lEvery other word you utter is love
3 e) B8 W) T8 k( {6 J2 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  x' b5 a& j8 u" H, wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" G* }* f$ c6 j: Z0 {I’m still filled with fear
) B* E1 F+ t1 t5 u: L2 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" B+ R! e8 ~3 k" R& LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ]8 S  M% C9 ]5 u( Q/ @$ p4 VWith such a tongue as yours,
! e8 O9 `4 m, V& W* pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* m8 Q# O1 M5 m* [2 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ j: P% z/ k' L0 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* X4 P; x6 h3 w+ O; X2 g% v1 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( [1 R- P: d. s* [' q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# B5 [8 I# D! J7 I, ^! t1 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% T8 t" [3 n/ x( q% u8 G$ @; v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, `* F' W0 O& c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ {1 ?9 w/ F  C, u/ K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" i% m5 ?/ }1 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 w3 z, x( I& b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 }1 H8 D$ X" c9 t. m! m3 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( p$ S7 l* O; O3 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
+ @- r6 H' p  w& U; h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# B' B! Z5 \9 L' I; p8 g4 B% n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ x/ c1 k1 A, i  ]" ?# t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; ^# B% Q9 }0 k6 h  a9 ]! T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 @+ n! F  ?% `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 Q: D4 D0 T, P" \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 G" x1 w8 ~$ z) `" a) m( g0 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, h: S; M( k' A) A! ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( s2 G$ F  @4 t2 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 I1 H  O3 @' X5 M' }) X$ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 f' p5 j# L. |% G9 f6 Z& ^) B- T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# |* A: _# ]- g) C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _" H, \! T9 F; ]3 [8 _* C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# Y5 @" r4 u/ m7 F1 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' W, R: t  |* \/ f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) X, G& m; |# N5 Y& r7 x/ u6 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 b0 u% x" k8 i( r+ q% u  R2 b6 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 B9 S3 @: w$ j6 }" t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>