【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 y4 Y4 @' F- K3 ~9 v4 P3 j8 b7 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: z8 X; n4 j3 J) h+ CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# E; I5 i( J8 @0 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
) w* @) |3 A8 o# l$ X8 F! MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ h+ X1 k1 E" Z. b, K% b( |4 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 j0 c4 Y0 z/ `* a7 B- E: ^$ F; pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; e5 i+ z, ~5 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 P8 J$ f6 u& {- E' O/ d  t7 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ @% Y1 p1 D" DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ R7 l+ `+ q: F, a0 W! G& ]With such a tongue as yours,
5 M3 C1 e2 O+ ~# E, d# w) W1 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% {" R$ F- _9 W' NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q( L( A+ t' r1 \! o& P* r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. {, Q! L9 U1 N: ?. i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ T5 m# [* ?  L% m4 Y' C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 I; x, z2 f  z5 r9 g- _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 x2 x& c( g  U) e0 y+ \% k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: p; r" e/ B+ C4 o3 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 P2 v# k' S! r9 J2 R$ [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' Z1 U1 z' l+ ?$ }/ ~8 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Y5 u0 e; f) }' V$ n7 ]7 B" d: _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' s2 D6 M- [9 S- j3 z0 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, d8 j4 |7 G/ }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 c; Z) q- f. M% H" `' ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, ?* g) J* E9 S7 Y" b6 g0 |6 v$ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' h; g; R4 e5 h' S4 Z- x. i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 N) L' |# [. J4 b+ n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 ]& a/ A' t# [( F: r  x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( Q8 R8 H+ n5 T& _! H! h& \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  t6 _( e) s6 c- J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" o& k( B  d/ m( ^- ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>