【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. X3 e$ D% L5 A5 z! _# R歌词我附在后面。
  y6 x, M( a9 d. F. l1 |. q% @! QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% B) g1 B  v; G2 ?5 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! a8 K+ A+ Z% \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 ~% z3 a0 `4 `) KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ L4 F  [* n# Y& i  KI really want to know just how much you love me
7 f+ E" j5 z7 P$ RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ^6 E, q2 T1 X  q% |3 T* m1 Z/ ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 N' D# C4 E1 e2 m8 TWith such a tongue as yours,
3 p% n; p% l: C: u- NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- d: ~5 S, Z* C1 o5 ^, J1 B. s' JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  n# F, D5 ]$ G" ]7 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 O. A0 ]* J% }/ u/ P/ b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) v, g: r6 B  E8 u8 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 c; k) }4 d4 ~5 e: |* \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; d( ?. V9 M( X* S: o  K7 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( q6 d! U$ F. f$ X1 p, N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 s& E4 L$ O; {; e/ y7 Y- ~<P>你无需担心</P>
# P3 e& d  a# C* c" c2 V7 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) x9 X* D  S+ |: w, d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! ?/ `# d0 o/ S8 _& O/ F! z; V- r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' p/ h1 g( W% X" q( k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 z# i2 j, t8 e0 {  U; H- k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: n/ F0 Y+ d- x( e) B6 q6 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ^, D& j6 j- M$ ]( K7 o8 I% P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, w2 m8 y' P) y  H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 b. A) }# a4 y6 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 V5 j6 E+ N; a3 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# y" U( n2 i. C7 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: P. R1 D( `8 ^6 D4 J/ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( P: M! ?8 T/ H) U/ U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ^2 H& n' J0 [; v3 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& \) f0 A& H; Y* |9 [, w' s4 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  @+ I! g; x! y- z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 o: t( z' R, }, p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& }' S5 f+ E8 G( q9 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  G% W6 x1 f3 z' `* ~& V9 h' k! M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 k: [4 q8 h: m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" J' H# Q! R' F2 C: u" ?% O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- y9 p* M; T7 A9 o/ s2 x2 }) O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% Q9 a' Z; ]. p8 j$ c1 v我请你剖开它

  k2 l! ?" K5 ]3 N5 T/ J7 W- x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>