【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 g" b. r) I7 j: J, k( \) j" V  C8 v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; y$ n2 o; V9 c7 O1 g& J9 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& W2 R$ [: i' q; g% Q" J# zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# B+ z( u( h, |' ]4 `, |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% G! W/ i; P9 MYou needn’t fear anything
! J  |& u+ \7 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, E: e; f& n0 |, |0 x* J4 YI really want to know just how much you love me
  f8 V) O& ^& k* x# LI love you I love you with all my heart
) I9 g  o% T* @% @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% b6 ^6 H0 I$ n. wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! n2 E& m  i$ d8 d, M( HI regret not dying
( d: s& n; w. K( Q# i. n: p! h! ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 g8 C: r3 A1 f+ f5 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. U( U' o9 Q; S0 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* Y: c* H* S! \  d. N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 F3 I' n8 N# l' t# A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 d- Z4 J# e9 f  ~: z3 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ q7 e  h# I' X- B3 E% ^: ~# S0 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# r# F, u  U0 k, V: t6 z0 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ G; F- b8 H0 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; b7 v+ |5 q$ w6 c3 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 m0 Z3 T7 O' G6 _5 f, w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' C" ^' d8 k7 S8 _* a2 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  p& m; j: T! a- X6 N, q0 C- p& N0 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, G& A0 U# v0 s" ^+ J4 c. ?$ [' E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: }- @% b8 n+ ]) Y$ P: d6 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. v5 ~) ~2 {0 K& F8 z/ V. @' S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# \" t% Y, K4 `; n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! U* M4 z. A# X/ ~2 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) ~, Y8 l( z/ {0 Y7 n- |2 s! X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ v) [% r8 v+ ~+ b1 s. S* R. R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" g' g1 a8 T& e$ `1 z3 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: e9 v3 V) M( B7 V! J% T+ g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( W' M2 {; U/ H( }; ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" v8 g' Z5 @9 Q% e/ j  [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 b* x$ y# w/ C; ?$ l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# O" i6 W' Y/ S: G3 h' s* S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- n' V: A# y7 ~  l. O( a! l6 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% r$ F3 J& I: X9 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>