【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
  C* M4 w' s; Q# bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 x. T' v- o( iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" ~! P" N9 L8 J% ~6 w/ aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! l6 C3 m) `6 u  N' d, K7 d* Y2 C' U) GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ `* S3 ~# T7 Y+ T, A% FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: R: V. Z; D0 T8 ]) g4 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( v& s9 Q7 {; V0 P# BI want so much to see inside your heart
+ B$ _# m: o3 P! q1 K9 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ K  d3 |7 ^$ ^% U3 |I’m still filled with fear
" x+ X" Q- J! I9 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 e% d: p" X. wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" w1 w2 L  I  GWith such a tongue as yours,
9 e. `9 d' N. g3 a' ^# ?, tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% k% T3 P  J* P8 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( m. V8 a: z' u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( D, ^, b/ W* T% r/ S% C9 Y- a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" N% q7 V9 k0 f4 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 V( y" C. }. c6 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) f2 u' Z, A, ^7 g; e  e2 _3 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ X5 K% X, k1 m; W6 B5 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; T6 @( y$ a- ?. L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ [+ r3 S  D9 X' t4 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- n, _; k+ H- x/ x1 X& d+ Q9 t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ l( @0 X2 K: B2 o# T, B5 Y* `% |0 `; X0 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( d' X/ U: n7 f- i7 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% j; ~, |) r# ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 q" h  P. Y+ ~4 n* y4 |4 t% W5 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% h* i- L0 K8 b0 f, f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 c8 _/ \# ^! Z  N9 F1 Z' E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 i" U& Y$ S  n. z" J3 |$ a. F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* r* f  ~" \: J, g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 u! y+ f9 X9 D/ H. p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  R# q  I8 j# u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. `; V& O! n  X4 j/ m* N. Z# y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 j1 z  A4 n! h% V! `; O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. T3 q9 _9 U. ?% ^: K" e( k7 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# r1 |: W  b9 I' A; h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 h; i8 I. S" o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 B  c% ]' C; J0 S: _$ [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- E" v9 P* t- T' t7 f/ U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  E% k( i( H+ @9 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>