【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# ]' z' B/ u% e4 C, ^$ OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- a9 @) m$ i# Z7 K, \" o: UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, C* d/ i/ d" }( O4 e! |1 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  g: p5 h$ G8 N/ S9 p' G! HThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 u! L5 g3 `, A, q1 z* m% OWith the moon kissing it every night
" M" G1 d% j7 rSeeing the sky content with its love
& R+ ?3 u, t9 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' v# A, [  N- ?* H7 ^( b9 W% bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! F; }& Z- w, MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, G; f# d6 Q# s% ?8 T1 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 t, w3 o: ]9 n4 y% n, [+ g- p( KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& I: S) B! h6 Z8 W; H! U4 g8 y4 MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! A& F6 O2 b3 G; rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 Q; h4 O" z8 d) g! N+ xWith such a tongue as yours,
6 o( {! a- k! n* o- HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: p5 U+ J) A  j' ~4 t" B1 O" u+ uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' F0 W  ?& v1 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ o, C/ W+ c9 r) D4 S- w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ~) U" N# E/ R" b/ i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ ^: w# R$ z4 G# S4 c+ p2 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 n* |$ j9 |  _( b5 C9 @5 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) f% `$ R1 v7 s: l8 _1 o& g; r& T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% M, z4 b* s( E, C' g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ C0 G2 t+ {! M- c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  b$ I& P  U1 U) L9 d) _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 o+ K$ F* U1 Y1 w9 d9 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 d, k2 d" A1 v$ j4 W  I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ t4 o2 }0 Q' H. d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 @# m! [, g- A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; ~# k# `; B; s$ E5 J) V4 Q3 U2 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( R, o. ^: D% R% d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( @; T  M1 `& L  ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' M2 [9 o/ q( f7 v1 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 t# ~) A- x/ k& R* q7 u8 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P. ~" i/ W9 n  C) ~9 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" |( p/ |& i$ Y: ^- O$ R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  j- F9 R0 @7 p- A! c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 A: {/ o% {' d6 M. X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* z* G; @/ R% o' \9 {. s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 C& m/ M+ c1 y9 T! |* j/ ~" c- R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( Z9 j) _3 [) b6 R6 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ }/ D# k( {" F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 ^- C6 a! P9 }5 O+ |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
- ^9 z) @7 n# R
* Z9 [+ g$ U9 H" r, F& K: _9 R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; Y; H% U5 l: q% n, a- G: f3 q0 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>