【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ O2 p3 t4 L! j2 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* m; _0 H! p5 o5 g7 ^' t/ ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
) m  T  v" Y; f5 R+ c8 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! O( l  H; i! G3 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ?2 o) @1 L3 T1 R6 ^! W6 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
% y6 n4 G) i" p4 I3 g+ BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  V8 B1 O0 v4 t3 D" ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 A' H9 N5 K& J5 K& J, u2 p) FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, i5 @2 C$ e  _, |$ W; `. s9 G& dI want so much to see inside your heart
4 I# \4 @5 i# f9 W& _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& T) F7 j; P. {4 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* |" i7 X( H; R5 D# SI regret not dying
4 z3 E) D3 J# e) s; sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 Z8 l8 _' F3 `3 X' `" }6 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% x* `- X; C( N4 Z" E. n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- k) g: t/ Q2 [& _$ K& g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ q& [% f3 R! X  L, K- l$ c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ C, y+ e4 ]5 A! L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, L" v* `& W; O# T  P" S) q3 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& Q5 `' C: k" u0 n" A3 Z5 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ^% G0 ?" J* _! K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' r1 e: s8 `/ R1 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ \* L; w8 a" [6 |3 s5 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 _0 J' F4 m% ]7 s' E( F/ ]<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Z. c  K- l6 Z! _3 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ ?0 G7 ?! `: R8 \: X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  F1 h3 D! ?; p9 {  P! X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" u" z! Y2 j( S7 R; N4 h! P3 i: I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ m& y5 Z2 g9 m% n$ Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: A& R' o$ h* w# m4 {. l# ^+ \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% s* m& f8 c' W5 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 E  X, q% d  b1 Y+ e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; `# E& n% t* X( ~$ I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Z9 g) j; N! }  t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 C8 u7 x* W( b6 S! @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* T/ h9 R: a5 o% G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ E0 e1 p4 q7 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' i3 g8 i$ t$ T( Q8 h, W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! S6 X% D9 F3 K- c1 c2 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 B# Y' v" z8 W2 o+ i% n* d) l1 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ~5 x: D0 ?6 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% i" G* s6 u& e' @. V9 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. q5 f0 t! ^3 E+ ~# Y/ L, K& \我请你剖开它
% s2 S4 \5 G8 L8 S
4 X. W# q8 N1 Y" I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- ^3 ]- |( U6 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>