【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 B" l, V7 m* Y8 S6 [+ _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ d  s! m* P8 ?$ M8 |& w2 z8 W1 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ y/ S* g# G* a' Q/ W( Z# f" J: TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: f5 Q& X. M2 h0 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 E* p5 O. Q2 d, C/ S7 n7 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' t! _# P7 u2 E  QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' A- O$ s# A4 w  G( |' vNothing can compare to my love
& r% Y$ G; b5 s: a; n0 a0 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; p" G! ?3 G8 e' q7 P0 i5 }0 n: [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 r# [, V0 r# NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 _  y3 R* F5 p' |0 Y7 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 G* I8 ?' N9 Q' e7 I0 n) @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& L8 P1 M8 l# Q4 T0 y% s5 `1 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( r. j, R; h) W' `1 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 `1 d: j( y2 {& J/ ^% |: D" E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" D* c4 F- |6 S& t8 p& k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 |5 U9 ~9 G% ^7 u! L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% U4 D9 k! |6 Z# ~9 s5 B5 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& L2 T6 {1 P' C( u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# f4 U3 I5 O# d0 b. B2 L, z8 m; s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' u7 r& k9 X' {" v% p3 V" Q<P>你无需担心</P>
; a, ~5 _/ B- U% H7 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 U7 N$ ]1 e! a; v4 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 f$ `) H. ]& g6 A) Z! p# @1 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" D5 C6 }5 e1 U' r9 E3 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( c8 f6 D6 @8 L) p. n' o1 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 P) ^% P0 ^) F8 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# Z; a" S6 S6 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ C& |; e% @# t9 d' A5 E( T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 U, k& \" L7 O* K7 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- A9 S) w/ b+ R7 s$ ]( Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 i7 o6 I0 W6 U* t% b1 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# W2 w5 ]; q4 U1 H6 ]! R) r我请你剖开它

/ O, W, x- p- f1 P; S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>