【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 `: |! M' o! bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% t3 z+ x+ T5 ]- i' sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( |7 Z* U& T$ k& _8 C7 p) q% Z  TThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ R, ^* \7 V! s$ CWith the moon kissing it every night
+ z) S* r1 {! q- ~( JSeeing the sky content with its love
/ b' W" b9 c( [! l  [! P& ?* m" rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- a$ ]+ {5 a" w6 EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 x5 K* t$ o1 v9 ^2 _Every other word you utter is love
4 J  j6 n) X1 CI really want to know just how much you love me
) Y: o) r: b* n) d* ^I love you I love you with all my heart
5 f1 [* p; D/ L! k: pNothing can compare to my love
$ E% f0 ~0 ~) i! z# U8 h1 b! @8 D. I8 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# }; m' a2 I9 R4 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 o" [& m. p4 S( H% uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, r0 w! J' ^9 u/ JWith such a tongue as yours,
' k% J# T% c7 S% u/ o9 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; Q3 p5 o% y3 n) y9 l0 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 {# Z3 s  I: x2 e/ I3 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: F5 y4 V- Q% x' c, `% W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ N) }( N% @4 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ g: [5 y' [  x3 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 D/ Z; L& d3 g* |- T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, C# i$ s( e/ }% k0 y" G% z+ ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" R, l' C; p; X7 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! d, g6 I) m+ t1 |- M' ?' ^5 [6 M8 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, ^, K8 x  O2 }9 G" M5 u; R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 c) Z" O1 E/ y( t. v  h) N4 B9 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 c& N5 y4 Y6 {: b" v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 C- {- C: Y! R8 G" X9 K9 H2 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( J3 R5 f% G. R/ G  n( L; R. p7 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 }- g- }0 m+ |" w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. [5 \) `: j- V' S; t1 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' i3 S" h! O& s; V4 U+ ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# w! V# y  K! i6 {9 {0 L) L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! F, U" _! s5 t$ _& c. G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" p' K! g" J3 k$ y5 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 W9 Z, h: U/ U7 z; \. |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) B( w$ w9 |: M3 c) h* L/ O, b) a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 n2 }: j# h! w# N' G6 l$ [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! U4 z2 D7 ^+ ~' G! Z  g% V" ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 t6 C+ G! }9 J0 x2 e; `' o6 h  R  b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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