【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
8 f7 @1 ?7 v8 z( G. i! H  g! |4 \$ XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; Y  k  T5 k  KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- Z1 W4 Y4 \. yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 P/ O2 X2 O7 r, K+ a. |I would probably know how you feel
+ N4 }" @/ g' fLove… just the word love
# J5 K* z7 C) b; z, mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) Q2 }7 J- F5 Z& b8 _$ VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( d0 `# s2 ~! M% Z# G- i" ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& p/ `1 i0 o$ ?8 }4 {) zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% k/ k" [8 a  P; z: }9 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 a7 M5 c6 x! Z( r: [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" c$ N. t" C5 j% x" ?7 d3 ECan I entrust it to you?
7 \: F4 ~( V% t! i+ m  {* |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# _: L5 a- P, {  \  X5 |- E; jEntrust my love within your heart
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/ f9 q$ M% h$ s/ ?& l& M6 V7 ?* T1 P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 T2 f+ y1 F0 }) N  }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 b! T$ _" r$ T- J3 ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ W; S7 z" y. @8 K4 S" ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 \0 T1 h4 T7 X, O( m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 y1 o/ y9 ^( X+ v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 K5 a( O6 w- f) X; c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* J; m# a+ R/ M! l4 Z& k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ S' p+ I: O- k# i! U: }. m) O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) v$ c( E' g/ x* _' D& ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ n% I2 b. X  }1 @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" l" O1 u& x( d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) g0 W' G4 e) q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 p  x8 r7 g# |8 D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 A3 k. p4 [7 Z1 Z+ i% E  F& g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, u- M' b% A$ F3 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  Q' P: H8 \5 [8 ]  {2 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 ?! B# M$ ^9 {/ q; o& l0 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' E% c* J: z" Y8 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ I# a; B: t  A2 p& C2 P" F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" H5 v7 ~; @0 d4 _; }' y( x2 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: b" l, u  o! e, A$ P8 t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 B( @! J3 e+ a$ a6 B# a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- I+ z3 \1 [0 ~/ q% @* r. z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& q7 Y  G- s- M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ h# n( S$ H* M3 ?7 \<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% w, l( D+ M  ]7 }) X; L4 r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; J4 s* j4 i6 n( L/ t8 ^9 L5 {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 K: ], @2 X$ ?4 X/ Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* ]1 Z. Y4 N. x4 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! X$ n1 Q0 x% E& d7 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ a" f- C% `: D4 ?( d; v; F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" h/ p1 B) ^+ V# S. i# V# `5 i9 U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: h2 k; m5 F( \. r' x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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4 L* t9 Z5 v, D% F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' l7 O, i( q, e, E3 s1 Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>