【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 @$ l) c# \7 |0 g0 ^( rI already loved you with all my heart
: E0 {' E2 n  D3 e! mWe meet and talk everyday,
! x2 k8 U# {- i+ pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& Y9 \6 j2 s, J0 IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 G1 v9 Y& X, }' YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 b/ s1 q0 Y) ?1 c( s( LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& v' G$ o, J- O1 R$ A8 TLove… just the word love
9 B/ ]  v* R* ^& KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  M" w3 U2 M4 A/ O* ]But I never did
( N- n- [/ }, k. ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' A: Q# h- Y5 r# E  DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 R1 M  d( Z3 c- z9 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ r% i1 g6 R( y2 i: }/ W6 HEntrust my love within your heart
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8 I* U! y$ P, h4 ]; e5 z2 J# k7 T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! n8 @% y* q5 j2 ~7 d$ w$ N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 z' b# T7 G% p- S- ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" O  X; t! e' V4 Z$ l/ ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: l$ Y, d( p0 o8 X, K" o9 l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 F( l2 N, Z8 T0 [, V8 M+ a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# t7 M4 x4 z. D# {/ |  _5 E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 ~8 L4 R! H# u2 ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# u! V5 @5 w$ [. d, U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, N6 C+ c4 J$ I0 y4 x<P>但我不会</P>
1 H( R0 m. F: E) H: a  b8 u9 Q* Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ n# j0 G% K8 d+ S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 r$ T& B5 @' `6 e8 G1 a+ \" @0 ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* P4 p$ B$ B- V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% h! U" b9 B& `) Z( ~' Q9 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ z9 J5 o# J& g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Q1 d- S" r7 m% e# R% Y7 p4 `! O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* i  E' E/ D2 p4 @: e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# d" v9 G  B! R5 z( I- _% u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  j, @4 z. x0 t1 W) B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" A: y  F* n6 M6 y* ]5 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 _2 O. e7 M' X/ x, h0 I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& D+ A* j# q  G' c% \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- x3 c( J9 s  D- i, _( f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 u  e. U- Y7 j* x! o( d4 L+ g9 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; \- A- p. }1 Q/ g+ Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, r2 I0 b! b3 T4 o+ R; K& R( |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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5 u8 A1 P& v2 t# R' e9 F* G& A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, k) v3 X& u0 }. j- s8 I1 K% A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 o7 G; ?- M" d* K  |* @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>