【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 Z9 p& p+ j, D) j) w$ ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' F  D- e; z& A( k! V  L9 mI already loved you with all my heart
8 D" S: K7 s9 ?5 bWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! ^( h) L" |  u/ UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# P0 B2 s! {2 I( D8 [I would probably know how you feel
, y; J& t) ?+ b7 t6 Y2 S  ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 i2 m( c9 L: \  F" \But I never did
( u( y8 J9 `: Z; m1 g7 G" \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ v6 [. l  @0 L; P8 GIf today isn’t too late,
$ k! ]5 J8 x1 h0 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 x2 g" J. s7 i" RCan I entrust it to you?
8 ?+ r0 J. I; s2 X7 _6 ]4 @9 HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) s: |3 g7 y! p/ k7 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 e% c9 [/ Z5 m  i- \8 h- [+ UI want to confess that I love you,
) D: y, X- K) @But I never did
/ ?1 f! V/ O# }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 j- h- x. X! r" F0 M5 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( Q# a0 L' D0 ~) Z, _; k- R8 A! qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) X% \8 d* g8 c, C' GEntrust my love within your heart
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9 J1 _. Z1 R4 ~& \  w4 t* |# l[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% c. W/ C# M% J4 d3 \8 v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 `+ P4 g5 z# \- v$ Y9 h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 |. f3 O$ G8 T7 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% R8 d7 v' |# a8 m& v" s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 K' f' S3 j! h" Q$ \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* }: s1 z3 R" Y! j0 p! y0 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ K& h" I3 ], [0 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& w! a. }8 X# R7 C. ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ K/ C) C2 U/ |1 |& Q. \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& u7 l5 [8 w7 Z+ v: u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ `9 G6 Q* s; G' Z/ h9 B& y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ _1 u" M& y3 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# i$ }  Z+ D# i  x4 E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% y* A' R7 w# K5 H7 G<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; A9 h* b4 ?2 W- t0 m/ {6 `" ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 T7 C5 Q4 v  e0 Y<P>But I never did </P>
$ y$ b" g, q" K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 e3 T  E  D$ T; G: z. d3 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 x4 l7 q5 u0 C# E6 f) j/ E8 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& |$ x3 X, `# C2 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# M/ ]5 ~7 ?' i1 ^7 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 @3 E/ F. M/ _9 `# S0 D( l( ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 j" b  u- C% E; x" }5 o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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9 S4 @, C# m) {! U  k9 ]<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ o; I: E/ q7 q% _4 p7 K: J, B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>