【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% J* c$ P0 v2 X$ U' H. W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. x4 r6 A) f; B  K2 s3 }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' l+ f' m- R  Z# B9 n0 ], D! W7 QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ x; b1 U# f1 }" q1 OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 |9 J. f' w7 B5 d% MI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 c/ o: J0 H4 i/ Y9 J! R  m. }I want to confess that I love you,
+ F8 |1 r% _4 x7 f6 y( D" xBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 r* s, F. X$ _1 u  c) E" xIf today isn’t too late,
% s5 B# `. S/ J+ A$ k1 K  zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- O$ j7 M8 g- C! ]% ILove… just the word love
. Z& C( _% u/ J6 X& ~4 _& GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( g. M* ^0 @% B3 \* CBut I never did
& q8 i4 {4 G5 ?, D& v+ }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( p% E. B) C6 y8 T% P8 {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 D! L: d9 r2 O9 L# eCan I entrust it to you?
; q, m8 v2 R- d9 y' bEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 s# d& U$ g: a) o8 j0 t
; y8 b3 C1 P6 p7 ~$ z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* k0 a, @% A) m1 R7 n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 e2 g& |5 s% W4 h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! C& Z/ Y8 H1 b; I; ^: [3 F( L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 |7 z- [1 \+ H, q& j0 t  o  C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& \3 v' L& U- f1 K0 h' D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. U' ?; Q. R% O  Z' l4 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: t/ f, o( i7 O6 @) _' y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- l  x% g7 p) U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 x' P; B0 z) x9 k# @* L# p, b$ `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 d& U! Q5 o! N& \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% ~: W0 j  O3 O& {6 B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) k1 i# y: N! H( w$ ]0 }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- d6 }, V/ [" h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 ~/ v, i( f) `' x2 j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# W8 G9 Y9 e3 O% {8 c% A% k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- o* X, {4 K! b% H( h5 ~7 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- u" l2 A1 g, G7 r5 z9 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 x8 C6 I- X9 F$ _2 ^4 U4 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 i3 Q$ J. X0 @- R( D" h0 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& f& j; v5 H5 K; L8 l2 d/ O) U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' l2 G( L' T: K# |7 s* K/ o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 n' |% R1 s- P; V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. y9 ~4 R* P3 ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. }2 T4 I  Q# j* l( v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 Z; K7 O' I' O* V) r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" ?$ x$ e% o/ |& |$ B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# a% x8 m4 [6 V' Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 V+ m& v6 l, D. S! k5 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ `0 B+ ], b% m4 x/ R) L3 [) p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' P/ S  M! T. B$ [9 |, L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 f3 D+ W5 ?( ?! b: @4 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 _4 h. t4 l4 z2 x6 ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 D) M2 z7 t- _8 k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>