【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 p( f, G% R6 }( p6 n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" m" }' S7 W- w! V4 v& cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ B6 A* ^( x( E) Y3 `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  e) h1 [5 D: F' OWe meet and talk everyday,
/ l  j* f" g% mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ f3 d+ T/ k3 i& v2 _6 O, F8 UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 a3 m3 ]) c5 |( R4 bI would probably know how you feel
- J9 v: Q7 U- b) O. w9 }Love… just the word love
1 y9 ^! K; X. T# Q+ {9 {4 C) L$ iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 D6 L6 C+ \# L0 |% p& A8 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ F' ?3 |4 @# o" z- O" Y- xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* n9 z! Z% a& A! D3 E6 K  o2 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' z% |! }) @$ A7 U/ SBut I never did
" ]. `+ r- P- z, w5 p0 [5 }; @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( q) r$ s3 O2 U/ t+ Z/ H- X  a6 x( xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 r% P$ j( h1 a+ R* nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# X2 `7 U7 u( ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' `" D' z! X8 T! r! K- N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" e# L  \& S+ f8 O9 c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& S8 a& Y& h; r( d* l1 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& K, X' S1 s/ [" v; p' P5 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 j# T- F0 h9 j) P8 z6 K0 A2 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% L- k! p) z7 H$ |/ o8 ~2 I. }; ~- s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! c* F7 B* w* Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& w3 \# P- \9 h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; X# `* @, M/ @7 ~* ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 U0 a6 F( N9 K0 f1 }; J0 X2 s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- C1 X, v! a: P- i5 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 D) x) ^% F  z! l1 z% d0 m4 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 l, s6 s0 S# W) }2 v3 }; S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 U  _7 `, J0 l" r4 E/ J6 o2 q8 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 }* _: {4 I( B& P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 d& s8 A% }; a, X7 l0 T# ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 L, _4 }4 _0 ?# G4 b* _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 e: l4 _; H" {" R" c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 i# s$ v0 [9 r5 _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  }# L6 k# b, D! S+ ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* c1 \8 O4 d0 W2 O4 D& g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  U) k: Z9 \" |7 @* s. \+ c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 g9 g. l9 V: f$ q( o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* L7 b- p2 J  V4 Q7 }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; o  d  {# ~; O- E, q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 W* ^. m& @/ j! r. \" g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>