【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; |% j4 r9 @2 f* uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; s. [  E6 I; H3 ?& H: i/ cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 e' S$ I4 ^' @' J8 f8 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ k( u; `8 t! ]1 h4 \With the moon kissing it every night
( o: @8 R4 f3 o: v6 jSeeing the sky content with its love
* A: s# C5 \3 e: D% @+ j( x- fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  t5 u& n* W: I* b4 _8 O% d- G0 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# D  g7 l) V4 @, ?. F# x( pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ l4 u! _( ?  a6 |% dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" G: N- }! L- ^. j; c5 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, t$ Q% H1 k. W. y3 ?- \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* G- \9 r- f! x* c& b+ {. w$ U0 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 t, a* J. M7 l! z* t9 J4 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' ]; n6 K% O& h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# F/ S. w# V; L8 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- d" K9 o4 o$ o4 g: u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" y1 Y7 L  y( I7 ~0 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 x- Z1 i/ l9 ~3 c8 u2 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- C9 G0 t4 k- I. d- V: s$ D8 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% T7 F: [/ `9 @' {  b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ P7 R6 X( x8 w$ h4 b' M+ ]( E' l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  t1 ?3 R0 a, |$ ~: L. k2 x$ G  h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 f! U4 @8 v/ w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* Y' J. T2 e" V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: M  n8 P. E9 d8 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# `3 T& P( m. a' B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- ?, {: J7 F/ a' H! _$ X( i, v" N: b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' `& Y) P; V& c- r7 B, a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 j: H3 q. j. e0 \8 q/ l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! ~& b5 j/ x5 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' Z0 p. v4 H, J" x! u3 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' \4 y% `) ]( n: i) d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 [; W& Z3 Q; T6 W+ C4 P2 u- f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 g1 H3 f1 L5 d4 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 {! l% r0 ]9 `, s0 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ r: |% e4 o2 `+ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 f- ]+ D! M/ e2 S3 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# W4 W8 r. R  a# T. W* c$ [; V  H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. L) G2 k+ Z3 M+ g: H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ C7 J3 Y1 c7 P1 S0 ]  f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 I# x9 r6 v. D; @我请你剖开它
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1 e8 ]  H$ S' N7 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 s  J* g1 C  I2 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>