【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 X3 j1 |5 I) H: X* O8 wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( D7 K1 x+ Y; @, l( W( N! fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; k, q' u: V# N. \# P& nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ n  B& w# a% p1 ?! N8 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' @) h, K% U: j1 h1 ?. lThe sky is happy down to its soul
' s' X( a, d3 t, E+ FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( o- ^5 p- w3 G4 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 T% t! a7 K, E( U6 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; V  S# [. A9 LI really want to know just how much you love me
# O0 S  }! {( F% c& `. j7 R& P$ n; ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* E* w% h7 a" w- h# N: Z) MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( G2 d6 j1 J; d0 `0 bI want so much to see inside your heart
5 ?, A5 _; P- a6 m' eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 {. K1 r0 h6 d4 `  RI’m still filled with fear
0 \4 m* s9 Y" B: b1 z* t3 ]. q( qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 O. u. p! V/ u7 j# gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  r( q6 B, O2 r& B, @With such a tongue as yours,
3 u3 v* d& G/ M& E7 H% }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' @3 t( ]9 j% d- p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# i1 n) o5 l0 i. P- t5 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ X/ L& f- T# r1 M- D8 }) Z<P>你无需担心</P>
: d; w; ]6 Z' X8 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( J5 v. J  J6 ?! x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! o: Z: \4 r% |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! w, z3 W' o8 v, ?/ M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 z6 e. P  U  C& ^7 p8 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' C% n0 d. m$ M4 E  E/ S. P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. a: i) A( t4 ]7 J, ^0 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 w+ v8 b0 @! q* G* ^$ L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' P$ A4 c% W/ L2 F! u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 K: H% Y8 h5 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* p5 @9 o* V4 f6 Z- D# v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% ~0 r2 a% {2 ~, F. c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 Y* y$ r, U& d2 s+ P% P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. A+ F! }1 S$ O- W$ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' K+ e, S* }1 i3 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Z6 r" z3 V6 V9 w# H0 ]. G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Z( H& [  c3 ?( x( G! @3 Z3 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ R! k, `5 ]+ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ C1 K. {# K0 z7 H- T: C2 v  C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# j, D4 q% j, o( W( ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) N7 ]) L+ }/ [5 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>