【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  K: z2 c. g+ X9 ?1 `# }歌词我附在后面。
- @" S; v# @; x) g. ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# s" C$ }- p5 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' M0 ]4 _$ w  @8 d$ U3 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, c+ \/ v2 a* G# MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% z3 l% b0 {9 e  W* m+ rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  A! T. J/ V9 M5 X6 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 t2 l% }! \* n) T/ F% N% [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& t+ q/ A  A  g; BI’m still filled with fear
+ p7 F% O  ?% D- I8 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' F# j2 e2 N+ n+ R1 eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; ]" \5 d+ U+ u' s; p' i2 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ X, D( b3 S! x- e" g& xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ y) R. x0 ]- p) ~5 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 S( o& v/ J# U1 W3 B, ^1 K% x) U, a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) y0 Y# H- ]5 r" N2 I( o* P8 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 c. E1 N7 W. }1 K2 Q; i# K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& g4 r# R4 f5 S: ]& j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ V7 Y5 R0 p2 u5 }- a4 I( K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! F9 C+ Q. ?" u6 n5 O/ A1 M* |% e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& V/ n+ }' E6 V" D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! m% M- G1 G/ D( s: G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! s" l+ U7 a  t2 t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" D2 T2 j" v% A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. H' [( ^& O9 ^/ G, U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- j2 H' V, P) m+ F* K" ?3 v; S2 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* y; N) u, Z$ s% J6 K1 l0 R. U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' u5 \' ^+ w7 L4 [: K( F- Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: F7 |7 C1 F2 p/ Y" r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: j6 P/ V$ w2 w  c! d$ ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 _9 @7 }7 T9 @9 l. p5 N; F: G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. B. `2 H$ u( K/ }; a8 y- ?6 f( A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 a( y  L) {1 g0 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) O( E* F3 Z2 @. z. p! a3 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 s/ E* u8 P0 s5 e5 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
; ^7 W2 S# _. P! F+ _9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) }4 \2 B1 `/ {2 ~+ V" n' m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- o; a/ l5 t7 Q. ?! y; ^% k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% p; e8 J( t7 u4 V4 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 P" x$ L4 g. E9 x: Y0 w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% y7 K2 r# `$ I* D, f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 `- ]# @3 `- C/ B7 k: i+ {' W) k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" l9 s* _; H% v' G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 a+ G1 E2 `4 g. _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>