【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, F7 T8 |% L" JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( m$ L+ y2 u  ]. W% mWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) R1 C+ W& E9 T3 Q' K  K0 JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 x5 G. F: }, gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 Y% g% j7 m6 H: M/ }% i$ jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" ?# ^$ J* u& y. E! pIf today isn’t too late,
. K9 p8 S! i( P& I! H7 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; o" i2 G4 H" f! gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 n0 K7 Z& G2 j, w6 u5 Y+ M1 JLove… just the word love
" D9 h5 F: s* Z. D: }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 x8 ]# E/ L6 A. `& nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: ?5 Q, r' B0 R: }" V! DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" D, ?/ U5 F+ }+ Z6 C) ?0 F8 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% [' O) ]9 ?, D* t  W8 GEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: Q6 s* J& G$ y% B% e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. n0 ]6 U, J9 N- p2 C/ y0 |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 P) ?9 y' _! A; R5 D* J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( `4 e/ Q9 |- I9 y, S& |. a% p$ L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ S1 I, u0 i: s5 |( S" V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, k9 R% O  J( c6 g" Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 S! r* _8 ^% D, o: m+ C8 G( ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 ~2 q: g( _7 D  I# z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 X2 O! k6 d: a$ x% b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) Y: U: Z5 j( G( n6 H% L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 ^+ u0 V/ L1 }! u# r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* v1 x  w$ f" q<P>但我不会</P>
$ y8 P$ l4 X' _3 d! r& ?$ O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 e" Z; E9 G' j+ [3 Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 o8 Z" ?+ W/ Y% ]8 J) V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; E& r" s* p7 A  |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" G4 M! a) u3 Y* N# j2 b7 x; Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. K+ T- R5 ~5 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ~  m9 _# [  m1 l$ g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ i& }3 B, K% d1 x) d! `& ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 o8 ]) q8 f- {4 O+ W  R/ s5 \4 x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ S" f! |. ^9 j+ c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 C, V+ o* p6 k2 }. ^3 Z9 x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! N1 x& ?' N6 U- C3 i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 Y! |  z, Y9 v; h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 H6 L7 ]% E; m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( `: R. T0 z+ e5 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% d6 C/ O) K/ u$ I+ H6 s$ r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# |8 G7 r5 \1 k9 B1 M# m3 a9 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& V/ E2 k9 h9 l$ Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 F# o* C9 ^3 V% a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- ^8 `; V  O6 A9 Y; S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 p( P0 y; L5 ~$ u" v
  o9 x# p- s* C# f" z* x$ z' G% U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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( R% c4 y3 t4 g/ z: v; B+ s<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ k4 l( Z# C9 a2 Y# B, a+ `, j2 y  d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>