【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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; Z6 f$ X- x: s% |! M3 g( K. S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 Q3 _: X2 x$ y) F! B5 ~, NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) ^# _& \! B! h1 P9 I$ pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: s- R1 t& _0 J. X/ mI would probably know how you feel
6 ~% {" D# U4 ^# L, B- uLove… just the word love
5 d! f+ B8 \0 R8 }$ nWhy is it so difficult to express?
- t, j! M: v5 X& I6 H/ F- ZI want to confess that I love you,
& C0 o+ t) J# `3 {. f  IBut I never did
9 A9 ]( G- _& V0 H- N' {/ |2 N' COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! }, r" p0 p& u2 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ~  r2 G; u  O% t/ Z% rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 t6 A5 G: j0 `I want to confess that I love you,
. ^  X) D8 }2 K# ?But I never did
1 E+ q4 e* o$ j0 F2 N0 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 @1 s* |- o+ j2 Y1 H/ MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ a, D" ~( Y' O9 z5 Q8 AEntrust my love within your heart

3 C3 \# i' o/ ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) B; g% Z  P% G6 o. x: _$ E9 d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% R* m" O* T/ x7 g# X! Q  L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ i+ T2 {9 Q. _4 r9 \+ |8 L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 v. x8 g& V9 g8 Q* H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 J7 @: |; |" W, v* F6 X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 h1 l# d: d7 F3 v- x4 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# F9 W: e: n8 C: Y) x( Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, a) \0 e; f# {- i' x1 \; y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 x/ e# B; ~. c) [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 T: \8 h/ ?* Y4 Z$ O: r9 T, x# X: j<P>但我不会</P>
1 |7 O1 x: d% Q. z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 n- z9 ?$ M) Y: W8 c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  V9 i7 J) ^$ D4 @2 Q2 j2 C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 w" c, _8 a* t( U+ b4 l4 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 g! t: M+ ~9 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  r. |6 r! G5 ~/ I  h* d' S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, _- ]) ~" Y4 _0 r* }2 |9 n% [: ~- ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* [) n' H0 L3 a% h8 T  M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: d" b2 Y0 ^3 f% ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% M- g9 [$ E' y; \$ M. v! p0 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% ~9 e% U# k- s3 z* \) i& _) ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( o! }; i' ~) Q  d  f% p<P>但我不会 </P>
" q& L% L( s+ F/ w/ e. L5 u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) N: d/ d& y( Q  D  I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: Z# U; ]4 C& \7 v0 p9 g3 U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 o0 S9 e- y( F$ l" g. p& M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# [% D) N2 K- J  j! \" V, i9 G2 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 M* _% s0 Z9 N! c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ e  l5 L0 e7 Y) M( a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: e! v- ~' H8 I+ ^: {9 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! K1 j; |) j& R' e. L- i5 l6 J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  n$ W  V6 O& x9 e: B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>