【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" c/ _1 a& ^' i3 TI already loved you with all my heart
' L2 ~& R: M2 X6 ]2 yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) N: ^0 U6 O8 l1 ]( k' oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 Q5 \- @: S# T: y4 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! i' b" W: l! K9 wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! s& k! |, o8 d. [6 @7 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- x" q  q& U  c$ D% V+ PLove… just the word love
7 N4 x- z4 K* X4 ~/ AWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ K8 ~; x- O% O0 a- f. B& t1 E  PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, F; a0 b" w. Q  Z7 _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) D3 F; p* k* b( WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% T2 Z" S) u5 S! J$ FCan I entrust it to you?
& J' K  C+ G# _0 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 _) R# G7 D/ Y& \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! N9 W) o  Q( u9 q( I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 B; B. J  F1 _0 t1 M. y' j9 Z$ Q- {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: Z' n* u  U& G7 B/ }1 C( ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& r( ]: ]+ `/ |# g' V' p' [# [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, c: t8 c6 h6 F/ [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ \( y+ h9 f  o8 g4 f2 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ x5 z9 Z- X0 [; L. v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. s4 r: a  S5 d4 N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 o% `2 p7 a9 P- h  B% r' u<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- @7 M" F* r3 A7 \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 {  w+ K  B0 @6 _& ?1 T* k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! i/ ]6 d. ^: `2 ?: l/ B* }3 n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 y+ P% E( ?2 E: T<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' k9 J5 B( O) ]1 ^3 A! m<P>但我不会</P>
3 Z/ Z& q0 U) V( F( O8 Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) l0 L; Q. I) J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ m* b! T4 k$ I, z7 g8 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, x! \' I/ S3 @/ s" p2 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# B* i, K6 f# E# o! d6 M1 J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: G& L& o# G2 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: z$ w& y  Y0 K2 }3 G$ K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% j" Y  `4 @$ W: T# H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" P+ x- z# t* y3 B5 E+ g<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* k8 N; D7 w7 J; n8 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( C+ i- P7 w* U2 j4 }! E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ Q( W. q$ q0 ^4 [5 N/ N( ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* E# ~! m. O/ Y$ M& F) l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& I- r# J2 k, F+ E4 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' Q, [8 G3 F0 F8 p% `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- f& U3 [! E. V0 m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 w& L. W' Y3 M0 u# O% }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 N5 A7 ?0 E; N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" G& H2 X1 ~- i3 B/ b9 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

$ F; J* b! U) X4 B0 _( Y( F0 M<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ L0 b; i- ?7 A& M" d, U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>