【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. P4 k8 B- x/ H- r8 t: g5 nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 G/ b& [& e- J+ {We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& J- [% D9 ]9 j5 @2 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  n5 i2 _; T* `: T# i1 @1 _- r- ?. tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ ^  w/ ^* i$ e9 YCan I entrust it to you?
% Z* I1 u* N- h0 F+ JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 }, ?4 P- V6 [3 s" LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 z: |3 r# r2 O( f$ d5 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( [7 I& P) h1 {! `) q6 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 f  E8 ~) d5 w$ L" P5 k# UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

- x; L0 @% v/ Q: G' f5 t- r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% Z9 w* m- g# L$ N* S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* D# U* F# l' l6 ^  d& R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ K) ]# n# B* k9 ^' t, \% `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: G5 J& ?" j; H0 y( o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 r9 B, w7 x# A& ]& B  L; ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 \  ~. A, `2 M3 W. w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ }3 ^6 m1 K* O7 W% a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ }0 i  ^+ d% J* p5 J1 Z# x; v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 A0 e6 D3 v& z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# U0 n; J4 v* S& V' y* R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! s' Q9 d3 B8 g  x- t5 i  o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# K) R" d6 J% ?  b7 S1 c  X% C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 ^5 [/ D4 k' z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 G& x& h' L* j' \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; x& a/ @, {* C/ g$ @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 Q5 p" k: h( z* s$ W. C: Z2 [5 ~' |  Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 Z2 o. y4 L# b2 G$ c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( c+ _# V% h0 ^% r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ r1 j/ _, N6 O* O( R+ C6 v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! c& ?( o/ k$ w+ p1 o( m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ e1 I8 z* {- ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 B$ L8 C/ J- m0 p3 N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 D3 j3 H: N" x/ v% i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& a5 f: X$ E- ^) t7 a; c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; Z" x+ @7 J( |  H. t8 \8 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; x( D% i4 o; E. T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, R# Y* [; v. ^. r& A6 ]; `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 K( L4 W6 v9 G1 n! H% h; e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  k4 {2 `, S6 }  J; Y+ R& M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( h- M* D' P% U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 `! d2 f7 J# j5 g  a" N/ B. S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ |" K+ x; ~/ w1 a6 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) A8 S5 i9 k! `% V2 `3 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( h1 ~; b7 j- k' b; h3 h6 U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- j: ]6 a, H( ?3 b: C6 ]% h, L( z. y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>